Wisdom Teeth — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

That time I was marooned by a toothache – weeping eyes screwed shut, mouth agape – I might’ve been taken for someone in the throes of ecstasy, lying on the couch with all the windows open. The weather was June, and wonderful. All afternoon I clung to the thread of the brown thrasher’s song.

Even in extremis it’s simple to tell a thrasher from his cousin the catbird: he repeats almost every improvised line. Paired phrases sometimes reach into the low thousands without repeating.

Pain can sound exactly like the world, I thought. Neither can be replicated. Art lets us exceed ourselves, and so escape.

Eventually, both wisdom teeth had to come out. For a week or two I had to chew deliberately. Each bite of food was accompanied by a mouthful of thought.

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Dave Bonta opens in the offhand voice of someone telling a story across a kitchen table: "That time I was marooned / by a toothache." The word "marooned" does a lot of work. It turns a couch into a desert island and leaves the speaker stranded in his own mouth. The picture that follows is almost comic. With "weeping eyes / screwed shut, mouth agape," he might be taken for "someone / in the throes of ecstasy." Agony and bliss look alike from the outside, and the poem keeps that doubleness going. The windows are open, the weather is "June, and wonderful," and the suffering sits inside a perfect day.

What gets him through is sound. He "clung to the thread / of the brown thrasher's song," and the verb matters. He doesn't enjoy the song so much as hold onto it like a lifeline. In the second stanza his attention sharpens into something close to bird-watcher's pedantry. Even "in extremis," a stiff Latin phrase that gently mocks his own predicament, he can tell a thrasher from a catbird, because the thrasher "repeats / almost every improvised line." The poem then claims that the paired phrases can reach "into the low thousands / without repeating." This is a pleasing paradox. On the small scale the bird repeats itself constantly, yet over the whole song it hardly ever does.

That paradox leads to the central thought of the third stanza: "Pain can sound exactly like / the world, I thought. / Neither can be replicated." Pain is treated as something heard, as vast and unrepeatable as the thrasher's repertoire. Then comes the turn: "Art lets us exceed / ourselves, and so escape." The claim is abstract, but the "I thought" keeps it modest. It is a idea half-formed on a couch, not a pronouncement. The bird is making art without any plan to comfort anyone, and the speaker escapes his body by listening hard enough.

The form suits that modesty. There is no rhyme and no regular metre, so the line breaks carry the rhythm. Sentences spill across them. In "lying / on the couch with all / the windows open," the break after "all" leaves the reader suspended for a beat, as the speaker is. The first stanza sprawls over ten lines, like a long afternoon, and the later stanzas tighten to seven, five and six as the thinking gets more compact. The diction stays plain throughout ("couch," "come out," "chew"), which keeps the large ideas from floating off.

The final stanza brings the poem back to earth. "Eventually," sits alone on its line, like the wait before a dental appointment. Then comes the blunt fact: "both wisdom teeth had to come out." The title is a pun, and the poem uses it with some irony. Having argued that art lets us escape, Bonta doesn't pretend the escape lasts. The tooth still has to be pulled. The recovery slows the poem down again. "I had to chew / deliberately" forces the same deliberateness on the reader through the line break, and each bite is "accompanied / by a mouthful of thought."

That last phrase gathers up the mouth imagery that runs through the poem: the mouth "agape" in pain, the thrasher's song, the chewing, and now the "mouthful" of thought. The mouth is where the suffering happens, but it is also where song, eating and speech happen. The ending suggests, as an inference from the imagery, that the wisdom isn't in the teeth that were removed. It is in the habit of attention that the pain and the birdsong left behind.

The poem matters because it is small and honest about a big question: what can art do for someone in pain? Bonta's answer is neither grand nor dismissive. Listening can lift you out of yourself for an afternoon, and afterwards you are left with a body, a bill of ordinary discomforts, and a slightly slower, more thoughtful way of eating lunch. The dry humour keeps the poem from becoming precious, and the thrasher's endless improvisation gives it something to match the pain against.

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