Futures trading — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

the farmers of chance eat for nothing every man intent upon his belly

satisfied by the offer of a good cuff on the chops

as full as a leopard known to take heart at a great supper

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Hunger runs through every line of "Futures trading", yet nobody in it is fed. Dave Bonta takes the language of the market and turns it into the language of the table, then lets the reader notice that the meal never arrives. In six lines he suggests that speculation is a kind of appetite, and that those who live on promises may be paid in something far less nourishing than they expected.

The title sets the terms. A futures contract is a deal about something that does not yet exist, such as a harvest still in the ground. The poem's "farmers of chance" are therefore a witty inversion. They are not people who grow anything. They cultivate luck, and what they harvest is the possibility of gain. They "eat for nothing", a phrase that can be read two ways. Either they get their food free, without labour, or what they eat is nothing at all. The poem never settles the question, and that ambiguity is the heart of it. The next line, "every man intent upon his belly", is blunt and a little scornful. It recalls the old moral complaint about people ruled by their stomachs, and it reduces the whole crowd of traders to a single organ.

The second stanza delivers the poem's sharpest joke. These men are "satisfied by the offer of / a good cuff on the chops". The word "offer" matters. They are satisfied not by the blow itself but by the prospect of it, which is exactly how a future works: you are paid in anticipation. The line break after "of" holds the reader in suspense for a beat before the punch lands in the next line. "Chops" is a well-chosen word, since it means jaws or face, but it is also a cut of meat. So even while describing violence, the poem keeps us in the kitchen. Being hit on the mouth and being served a meal become oddly the same event.

The final stanza widens the lens with a simile: "as full as a leopard / known to take heart at a great supper". Moving from men to a big cat changes the tone. A leopard is a predator, so the traders are cast as hunters rather than farmers, and the poem quietly accuses them of feeding on others. "Known to" has the ring of hearsay, a rumour about a leopard's habits, as if the comparison were itself a piece of market gossip. "Take heart" is a stock phrase for gaining courage, but placed beside "supper" it also hints at the animal literally eating a heart. The tidy expression turns slightly gruesome. Then there is the contrast between "full" and "for nothing". The leopard's fullness is a fact, while the men's is only claimed, and the gap between them gives the simile an ironic edge.

The poem's construction is spare. It has three two-line stanzas, no rhyme, and no punctuation. The missing full stops matter, because the poem never closes, and the traders' bets never settle either. Sound does the work that rhyme would normally do. An f sound threads through "farmers", "for", "satisfied", "offer", "cuff" and "full", so the language keeps lipping and chewing. The *ch* of "chance" returns in "chops", linking luck to the blow it ends up delivering. The short, hard syllables of "good cuff on the chops" land like the punch they describe, while the longer final stanza sprawls and settles like a full stomach.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it does in so little space. It does not lecture about greed or gambling. It sets up a comic, slightly menacing image in which men line up to be satisfied by almost nothing, and trusts the reader to draw the moral. Its compression is also its challenge, because each phrase can be read two ways and the poem refuses to say which reading is right. Like the futures it describes, its meaning is a promise that the reader has to decide whether to believe.

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