Graveyard shift — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

we pay for the morning in unaware work

day is a hollow dance the world makes

my heart give me a few ordinary words

but do it in writing the nights run faster than ink

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Dave Bonta's "Graveyard shift" suggests a speaker caught between exhausted work and the urge to write. The title points to night labor, and the opening lines carry a weary bargain: we "pay for the morning / in unaware work." Getting through the day seems to cost us our attention, as if we do the work half asleep.

Daytime itself feels empty, "a hollow dance / the world makes," something performed by habit rather than lived. Then the speaker turns inward and speaks to their own heart, asking for "a few ordinary words." The request is modest, but it also feels urgent. The final line gives the reason: "the nights run faster than ink." Time slips away before the speaker can get anything down.

The mood is tired and quietly pressing. There is some loneliness here, but also determination. Writing looks like a way to hold onto a life that otherwise passes unnoticed.

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