Ministry of Truth — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

a fire looking in all the books

re-writing the endings to make an end of writing

how to order myself for the year to come

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Six lines, no punctuation, not a single capital letter: Dave Bonta's "Ministry of Truth" looks at first like a note scribbled in the margin of something larger. The title does a lot of the work. It recalls the department in Orwell's *Nineteen Eighty-Four* whose job is to alter records so the past always agrees with the present. Bonta takes that bureaucratic nightmare and gives it a stranger, more elemental agent: a fire.

"a fire looking / in all the books." The unsettling word is "looking." Fire usually consumes, but this one searches, like an inspector opening drawers or a customs officer going through luggage. Burning becomes surveillance. The sound reinforces it quietly, since "looking" and "books" share the same short *oo*, which chains the searcher to the thing searched across the line break. And "all the books" is vast and indiscriminate, with no titles, no authors and no exceptions.

The second couplet is where the wordplay gathers. "re-writing the endings to make / an end of writing." Two senses of "end" collide. A rewritten ending is a matter of plot, the last pages of a story altered to suit someone. But "to make an end of" is an idiom for finishing something off, and the line break after "make" lets that idiom arrive with a small shock. The project isn't to correct books but to finish writing as an activity. The hyphen in "re-writing" splits the word, and a line later "writing" stands bare, with the "re-" stripped away. Read this way, the poem enacts what it describes. There is a darker joke here too. A fire really does rewrite every ending, since each book finishes the same way, as ash. Even the vowels suggest kinship, because "fire" and "writing" share a long *i* that carries on through "myself." The destroyer and the thing destroyed sound like relatives.

Then the poem swerves. "how to order myself / for the year to come." The fire and the books vanish, and so does any confident verb. "How to" opens a question that never gets its question mark, like a heading on a to-do list or a resolution made at a calendar's turn. The movement from public to private is the poem's real pivot. "Order" is the key word. In the world of the first two couplets, order is something done to people and texts from outside. Here it becomes reflexive, "myself," something the speaker must do to himself. It could mean arranging oneself like books on a shelf, deciding what to keep and what to carry in memory. It could also mean tidying oneself before the censor arrives. The poem doesn't say whether this is resistance or surrender, and that ambiguity gives the ending its chill.

The form follows the content. Three unrhymed couplets, with no end punctuation anywhere, make a poem that refuses to end in the grammatical sense, which is a quiet irony given its subject. The lines are short and speech-like, and the rhythm is led by heavy nouns and participles: "looking," "re-writing." These are ongoing actions with no finished verb, so the fire's work seems to be still under way. The third line is the longest, eight syllables stretched over the task of rewriting, and it is followed at once by the clipped five of "an end of writing," like a door closing. The final line then looks forward in time, the only place the poem does.

What makes the poem worth reading is its compression and its direction of travel. It takes a large political fear, the destruction or falsification of books, and in six lines turns it into a personal problem about how to live under that pressure. It is also tempting to see the poem itself as an answer of a kind. Six lines are a tiny thing set against "all the books," but small things are easy to remember and hard to find. That is an inference, though, and the poem leaves its speaker, and us, still asking how to order ourselves for the year ahead.

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