Triptych: Against Moderation — Summary

Where the buck took a hunter’s bullet & lay down in the laurel, a dozen chipmunks are calling in unison – mallets on a xylophone all striking the same, middle bar. Too much moderation seems a dangerous thing.

We are only ever saved by what exceeds us. When old fields fall to subdivisions, the kinds of thoughts that need an unbroken span of sky vanish along with the hiccup of the Henslow’s sparrow, the wind in the grass. A few house lots hazarded in the forest & the wolves begin to forget how to lope, halt in the middle of a howl –

a freight train wailing through the gap two hundred years later. All it lacks is the shiver – such a small thing. It hardly seems reasonable to demand the return of thousands of acres of wildness just for that.

We sit at the crossing, engine idling. On the next to last boxcar, neat black letters spell out an immoderate & wholly inarguable projection: NATURE WILL WIN. Then the flashing orange light receding into the distance.

If you pray, pray for the physicians who cannot heal themselves. Pray for the shaman to remove poison everywhere he presses his mouth. On the loading dock behind the hospital, the same cherry has been burning at the end of one cigarette or another for hours now. Each new arrival joins the huddle hurriedly, as if to confer over some desperate case, bending pursed lips as close as necessary to suck a spark from the middle of a column of ash.

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Bonta's poem moves through four scenes, each one asking what we lose when we live too carefully, too tamely. Chipmunks call out in unison where a deer has died, and the speaker decides that "too much moderation" is dangerous. From there the poem mourns what disappears when fields become housing: open sky, birdsong, wind in the grass, even the wolves' instinct to howl. A freight train's wail now stands in for that lost sound, but it lacks "the shiver."

The mood is uneasy, half elegy and half warning. The slogan on the boxcar, NATURE WILL WIN, feels both comforting and ominous. The speaker seems sorrowful and a little wry, aware that demanding thousands of acres back "just for that" sounds unreasonable. The final image of smokers huddled behind a hospital, passing a single glowing ember, turns the poem toward human frailty. Healers can't heal themselves, and we keep feeding the very thing that harms us. The ending suggests we are still part of the wild, and still at its mercy.

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