Small bladder blues — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

O my bladder strain to reserve one spoonful of beer

morning and evening you are a new-drawn knife

old canary you never sing till night a great discharging

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Dave Bonta's "Small bladder blues" is a funny, affectionate complaint addressed straight to the speaker's own body. The title borrows the language of the blues, a song of lament, and applies it to something wonderfully undignified: the need to pee. The speaker pleads with the bladder to hold on, asking it to "reserve one / spoonful of beer," which suggests a drinker who knows exactly how this will end.

The images get sharper in the middle. Calling the bladder "a new-drawn knife" in the morning and evening suggests an urgent, almost painful sensitivity at those times. Then comes the canary, a bird known for its song, who here "never sing[s] till night" and then lets out "a great discharging." The joke is that the release is treated like music.

The mood is playful and a little rueful. The speaker sounds tired of the body's demands but fond of it too, laughing at the whole situation.

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