Under the sign of Janus — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The way the snow returns to the sky is far more painstaking than the way it falls. Near the end, it turns from ground to figure, from canvas to paint. It scales the ladder of its own self-effacement.

So the snow withdrew into a clef-shaped cleft & waited for its cue. This winter could go either way.

The witch hazel measured itself against an oak. I want to be a tree, it sang, when I grow up – A bird perch, An insect metropolis, A gallery of lichens above, And below, a husband to fungi.

True, I am all these things already, But not as a tree.

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The poem begins with a strange reversal: snow doesn't only fall, it goes back up, and that return is slower and more careful than the fall. As it vanishes, it stops being a blanket on the ground and becomes something more like the paint itself, wiping out its own trace. The speaker treats this disappearance as a kind of quiet effort, almost humble. The snow then hides in a cleft in the land and waits, and the winter hangs undecided, which fits the title's two-faced Janus, looking both back and ahead.

Then the tone turns playful. A witch hazel sizes itself up against an oak and announces it wants to be a tree when it grows up, listing what trees offer: a perch for birds, a city for insects, a home for lichens and fungi. The punchline is gentle and funny. The witch hazel already does all of that, just not as a tree. The mood is light, curious, and a little wistful, suggesting we often want a label for things we already are.

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