Bodily questions — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

in the book of the body is there no other writing true as romance

which is true and which false of two children perfectly made joined at their bellies and only one pair of legs

what work will make us fear the consequence of it

how is holding you so large a music

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Four short stanzas, four questions, and not one question mark. Dave Bonta's "Bodily questions" leaves its uncertainty unpunctuated, as if the questions were not waiting for answers so much as hanging in the air. The poem asks what it means to be bound to another person through the body, and whether that bond is a truth, a danger, or a kind of music.

It opens with a metaphor: "the book of the body." The body becomes something to be read, and the speaker wonders whether any writing in it is "true as romance." The line can be read two ways. Either romance is the one truthful thing the body writes, or nothing else written there could be as true. In both readings romance is treated as evidence rather than decoration. This first stanza also holds the poem's longest line, a long, unbroken sentence of eleven syllables that feels like someone thinking aloud.

The second stanza is the strangest and the hinge of the poem. We get "two children perfectly made / joined at their bellies / and only one pair of legs." The word "perfectly" matters. The poem doesn't pity these children or treat them as a defect. Yet the question that comes before them, "which is true and which false," is unsettling, because it assumes one of them must be real and the other not. The image works as a picture of intimacy pushed to its limit: two people so close they must walk on a single pair of legs. The belly is a good place for the join, since it is where every person was once attached to another. Judging by the imagery, the poem suggests that love dissolves the clear line between *me* and *you*, which is both wonderful and disturbing.

Fear arrives in the third stanza: "what work will make us fear / the consequence of it." Both "work" and "it" are slippery. "Work" can mean labour, but it can also mean a piece of writing, which picks up the "book" and "writing" of the opening. "It" has no clear antecedent, so it could be love, union, or the image of the twins. This is also the only moment the poem says "us," widening from private wonder to something shared. The question hints that we may not fear the consequences of closeness as much as we should, or that fear might be a sign of taking it seriously.

Then the poem turns, and the last stanza is the only one addressed to a single person: "how is holding you / so large a music." After all that abstraction, "you" feels like a hand placed on the page. The two final lines are five syllables each, evenly balanced, and they are the shortest in the poem, so the poem shrinks from a long, speculative line to a calm, equal pair. The grammar shifts too. "How is" isn't really a request for explanation. It works more like an exclamation of astonishment dressed as a question. Holding is a small, silent gesture, while music is invisible, fills a room, and unfolds in time. The poem's last claim is that something quiet in the body can be enormous.

There is no rhyme, but there is a quiet echo of sound. The long *oo* of "true," "two" and "you" runs through the poem, in the first, second and last stanzas. These words carry its three ideas of truth, doubleness and the beloved, and the shared vowel gently stitches them together. The word "true" also appears twice before the poem drops it, as though the speaker moves from asking what is true to simply listening.

What makes the poem worth reading is that it refuses to settle. The conjoined children keep romance from sounding sentimental, and the closing music keeps doubt from turning into cynicism. A poem doesn't have to explain love; it can show a mind circling it with its questions open, and finding wonder where an answer might have been.

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