Administrator — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

papers grow upon my hands and I am cold as a pear

or a captain of order exempt from land service

but see how, void of method the fox is wise at all times

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Paper is supposed to pile up on desks, not on people. In Dave Bonta's "Administrator", it grows on the speaker's hands, the way moss spreads over a stone, and the verb carries the whole first line. Documents are no longer something he handles. They happen to him, slowly, organically, and without his consent. Hands are what we use to act and to touch, so a person whose hands are covered in paper has lost both. The poem is about what a bureaucratic role does to a living creature, and it answers with a fox.

The speaker's second line gives a strange comparison: "I am cold as a pear." We expect ice or stone. A pear is cold differently. It is smooth, plump and quiet, a fruit cooled in a cellar, and the coldness is soft and slightly ridiculous. The substitution keeps the detachment but drains the menace from it. The speaker is not cruel, only chilled and rounded off by his job. A pear also hangs from a branch, held up off the ground, and I suspect that image prepares the second stanza.

That stanza begins with "or", as if the first simile had not satisfied him and he were trying on another identity. He is "a captain of order / exempt from land service". The rank is a joke, since he is a captain not of a ship or a company but of order itself. The exemption makes the joke darker. He is an officer excused from the muddy, physical business of serving on the ground. The language shifts here from plain to official: "captain", "order", "exempt", "service". Even the grammar sounds like a form being filled in. The judgment is quiet but clear. The administrator has rank without risk and authority without contact with anything real.

Then comes the turn, signalled by "but see how", an imperative that pulls the reader into the scene. The fox arrives, traditionally the cunning animal and here the wise one, "void of method". That phrase is wedged between "how" and "the fox", so for a moment it hangs loose, and a reader might wonder whether it describes the speaker. It does not, and the correction is the point. "Void" is also a paperwork word, as in a void contract, so the poem turns the vocabulary of administration against itself. The fox has no procedure and no files, and it is wise "at all times", a phrase that sounds like a proverb. The administrator's papers accumulate slowly, while the fox's wisdom needs no accumulation.

The form is as spare as the argument. Three unrhymed couplets, no punctuation, no capital letters, and lines of roughly seven syllables, with "exempt from land service" a beat shorter and the most clipped of them. There is no end rhyme, but "hands" in the first line is answered by "land" in the fourth, a faint echo across the stanza break. There is also a pattern in word length. The official middle stanza is full of Latinate, multi-syllable words, while the last line is nothing but one-syllable words: "the fox is wise at all times". Wisdom speaks in short words, and administration in long ones. The title adds to this. As printed here, «Administrator» sits inside guillemets, which makes it look like a nameplate or a rank stuck on a person, a label rather than a name.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it does in about thirty words. It does not rant against bureaucracy. It lets one odd fruit, one borrowed rank and one animal make the case. There is a nice irony in the form too. Three tidy, orderly couplets are themselves a kind of method, so the poem seems to envy the creature it cannot imitate. The speaker can see the fox's wisdom, but he is writing from under the paper.

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