Eros — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

taking the rope-maker to his rope-ground and the stove to drink some light

we touch and see how they speak of us our hands more than the mouth

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Eros is the Greek name for the god of desire, so the title promises roses, arrows, or at least a kiss. What Dave Bonta delivers is a rope-maker and a stove. The poem never describes love. It shows things arriving where they belong, then lets two people find out through touch that their bodies have been talking all along.

The first stanza is one unfinished sentence. "taking the rope-maker / to his rope-ground / and the stove / to drink some light" has no subject and no main verb. Only the participle "taking" hangs in the air, waiting for someone to do the taking. The "we" of the second stanza arrives afterwards, so it seems the lovers were the ones doing the carrying, or perhaps desire itself was. Either way, the poem begins mid-motion, like a current we notice before we see its source.

The two images are strange and exact. "Rope-ground" suggests, judging by the compound, a place where rope is made. The rope-maker is a figure defined by hands and patience, and rope also binds, so the word quietly brings in the idea of being tied to another person. The stove is odder. Stoves give out light and heat, yet this one is taken "to drink some light." A source of warmth becomes a thirsty thing that needs to be fed, and that may be desire in a single verb: even the self-sufficient object lacks something. "Drink" also turns light into liquid and gives the stove a mouth, which makes the ending, where the mouth is demoted, more pointed. Both images are about being brought to the right place, a craftsman to his ground and a stove to its light. That makes Eros here less a lightning strike than a homecoming, a thing finally doing what it was made for.

The second stanza shifts from objects to people and from a hanging participle to present-tense verbs: "we touch and see." The order matters. Touch comes first and sight follows, as if the hands make the discovery and the eyes only confirm it. Then comes "how they speak of us / our hands / more than the mouth." The pronoun "they" arrives before anything it can point to, and the reader waits a line for "our hands" to explain it. That short line sits alone, almost like a gesture held in place. The comparison is also left clipped. The grammar would normally ask for "more than the mouth does," and the poem drops the last word, leaving "mouth" as the final, quiet noun, outspoken by everything before it.

Looking back, the rope-maker was already a portrait of hands at work, so the first stanza was preparing the second all along. Hands link the two halves: the maker's skill becomes the lovers' language.

The form supports this restraint. There is no rhyme, no punctuation and no capital letters, and the lines are short, mostly three or four syllables. Without commas the syntax floats, and "our hands" can finish the clause before it or begin the one after. The sound is gentle. The long o of "rope" and "stove" gives the opening a rounded hum. "Ground" and "mouth" share a vowel, which links the two stanzas across their distance, earth on one side and speech on the other. "See" and "speak" echo each other too, as if looking and speaking were being brought close together.

The poem is small, but it makes a real argument. Intimacy is a kind of knowledge held in the body, and it is more like work and warmth than like declaration. Bonta turns away from the god's usual symbols and finds Eros in a craftsman's ground and a stove's thirst for light. The poem also enacts its own claim. It says very little and trusts the images to carry the rest, much as the lovers trust their hands.

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