Work song — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

business comes expressed as opportunity

so that the sum is no more than the sun dressed

in field dust laid by a little rain

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The poem is a short, quiet look at the language of work. It begins with a bit of corporate speak: business "comes expressed / as opportunity," as if every task arrives already dressed up in a hopeful label. Then the speaker does the sums and finds that the whole thing adds up to something much plainer and older, "no more than the sun dressed / in field dust / laid by a little rain."

That last image shifts us from offices to land. Sunlight caught in dust, settled by a light shower, is small and ordinary, yet also oddly beautiful. The title suggests labor, perhaps outdoor and physical, sitting underneath the polished vocabulary.

The speaker seems quietly skeptical, even wry, about the buzzwords, but not bitter. The mood is calm and observant. Judging by the imagery, the poem suggests that behind all the talk of opportunity lies something humble and real: light, dirt, and weather.

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