Claiming the Body — Poem analysis

Dave BontaRomantic

Body of work you make my heart race

body of evidence weighed wanting

body of knowledge errata

body of the report here comes the red pen

governing body hold me

body of water hold me up

body count deadening you overwhelm

body image upside-down in the lens

body in motion you rest at a constant speed

body of Christ one size fits all

body of missing pilot missing missing

body of a Venus elastic full of give

body work everything comes into play

body art thou.

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English lets one small word stand for a corpse, a committee, a lake and a lover. Dave Bonta's "Claiming the Body" works through that sprawl, taking thirteen stock phrases that begin with "body" and letting each one answer back. The central idea is in the title. Over centuries of use, "body" has drifted into bureaucracy, statistics and metaphor, and the poem wants it back as something that breathes, floats, grieves and can be addressed directly.

The form is simple and repeatable. Each unit opens with a ready-made phrase, almost like a dictionary headword or a newspaper caption, and follows it with one or two clipped lines that twist it. There is no rhyme and no regular metre, only short lines in which every word carries weight. Because the pattern is so predictable, the small disruptions stand out. The poem trusts the line break to do what a pun usually does with a nudge.

The opening movement sets the method. "Body of work" is a critic's phrase, yet the response is physical: "you make my heart race." "Body of evidence" becomes "weighed / wanting," where "wanting" means both "found lacking" and "desiring." The first sense echoes the biblical idea of being weighed in the balance and found wanting. The second sense brings the flesh back in. Then the poem turns bleakly funny. A "body of knowledge" shrinks to "errata," a list of corrections, and "body of the report" prompts "here comes / the red pen," a phrase that suggests a wound as much as an edit.

The middle of the poem is where tone and meaning shift most. "Governing body / hold me" reads like a plea to an institution, but the next unit answers it with something that actually can: "body of water / hold me / up." That final "up" arrives late, after the break, so the reader feels the lift as the line rises. Water succeeds where authority only seemed to. Then come the harder phrases. In "body count / deadening / you overwhelm," "deadening" describes both the dead and what numbers do to our feelings. "Body image" is "upside-down in the lens," which is true of how a lens projects an image and also of how distorted the mirror can feel. The wittiest unit is "body in motion / you rest / at a constant speed." It plays on the physics idea that steady movement and stillness cannot be told apart from the inside. The line also lets "you" sound like a lover who is calm and fast at once.

The next phrases carry religion, grief and art. "Body of Christ / one size / fits all" can be read reverently, as a promise of universal belonging, or sceptically, as a shop-label joke about conformity. Probably it is both. "Body of missing pilot / missing / missing" is the poem's most exposed moment. The phrase mimics a headline, "body of" normally announcing a discovery, but the body is absent. The repeated word works like a search call or an echo, and by the second "missing" it also sounds like longing. Against that, "body of a Venus / elastic / full of give" takes the marble ideal of beauty and makes it soft and yielding. In "body work / everything / comes into play," the phrase could be a mechanic's trade, a massage or something more intimate, and the poem lets all of those stay open.

The ending is the cleverest move. "Body art / thou." Read quickly, it is a tattoo and an archaic pronoun. Read aloud, it turns into "body, art thou," or "thou art body." The old word "thou" is the intimate form of address used in prayer and love poetry, and it gives the body a person's dignity. After a dozen phrases that treat bodies as objects, such as evidence, counts, reports and images, the last word speaks to one.

That is why the poem is worth reading. It shows how much human experience our idioms carry, and how a few well-placed line breaks can shake loose the feeling inside a dead phrase. The poem is short, funny and grieving by turns, and it ends by addressing the body directly.

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