Part of the solution — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

After weeks of drought, rain falling in the night smells so fresh: wet leaves & ozone & the soil coming to life. I keep going outside to pee off the porch.

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The poem opens with a long dry spell, so when rain finally arrives in the night, it feels like a gift. The speaker describes the smell in simple, sensory terms: wet leaves, ozone, and soil "coming to life." That last phrase suggests the land itself has been waiting, and that the speaker has been waiting with it.

Then the poem turns, and it does so with a joke. The speaker keeps going outside to pee off the porch. It's a small, earthy, slightly mischievous act, and it shows how much the speaker wants to be part of this moment instead of just watching it from indoors. The title, "Part of the solution," plays on that idea: the speaker is giving a tiny contribution to the thirsty ground, half seriously and half in fun.

The mood is relaxed, grateful, and a little playful. The poem celebrates being close to nature without sounding solemn about it.

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