Winded — Summary

a green wind at the door

I let it in to play and it began to play with fire

I ordered it out and it went and got lost in the forest

till the moon made it go to sleep in a bottle

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Dave Bonta's "Winded" turns a gust of wind into a restless guest, almost like a child or a pet. The speaker opens the door and lets it in to play, a friendly, careless gesture. But the wind plays with fire, and the game turns dangerous. The speaker orders it out, and the wind obeys, only to wander off and get lost in the forest.

The ending is the strangest and gentlest part. The moon makes the wind go to sleep in a bottle, as if the night itself were a parent putting a wild thing to bed. The image of a bottled wind suggests something captured, quieted, maybe preserved.

The speaker seems to feel a mix of welcome, alarm, and then a touch of tenderness or relief. The poem never says whether the speaker regrets sending the wind away. The mood is playful and fable-like, with a small shiver of danger underneath, and it settles into a calm, dreamy hush by the last line.

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