Prison guard — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

hear him speak of release the prison guard

an epicure of secrets an unsafe door

a messenger from their last day in the world

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Six short lines, no punctuation, not a single capital letter: Dave Bonta's "Prison guard" looks almost too small to hold an idea. Yet it holds a whole figure, and an uneasy one. The guard is a man whose job is to keep people in, and the poem keeps turning him into something that leaks, carries and tempts.

The first couplet sets the paradox. "hear him speak of release / the prison guard." The opening verb is an instruction, almost a whisper at the reader's shoulder, and the guard's identity is held back until the last two words. We hear the speech before we know who is speaking, and the word we hear is "release." It is a deliberately slippery word. It could mean a prisoner's freedom, the letting go of a secret, or the release of death. The poem never says which, and the guard, the person least able to grant any of these, is the one talking about it. Even the sound pulls the words together. The long *e* of "hear," "speak," "release" and "epicure" runs through the opening like a held breath.

The second couplet changes the guard into metaphor, and each phrase pulls against its own meaning. "An epicure of secrets" is a strange thing to say about someone in a prison. An epicure is a person of taste who savours delicacies, and the word belongs to dinner tables, not cell blocks. Applied to a guard, it suggests someone who listens closely, relishes what he is told and keeps it for himself. The poem leaves it open whether this is a quiet menace or simply the only luxury such a place allows. Then comes "an unsafe door," which is an odd thing for a prison to contain. A door in that setting should be the very definition of security. Here it is unreliable, perhaps because it lets information through, perhaps because it is dangerous to approach. The guard has become the threshold itself, the point where inside meets outside, and the poem judges it unsound.

The last couplet is the most mysterious. "a messenger from their last / day in the world." The line break lands on "last," so that for a moment the word hangs without its noun. The reader waits, and what arrives is "day in the world," a phrase that makes the prison sound like somewhere outside the world altogether. "Their" has no antecedent. We are never told who the prisoners are, so they exist only as a pronoun, which is how a prison tends to treat the people it holds. The guard carries news of the last day they were free, or of a final day of another kind. Either way he is the sole link to a life they can no longer reach. A man who seemed to stand for confinement ends the poem as a go-between, a courier of what has been lost.

Structurally, the poem is made of noun phrases laid side by side like items in a riddle: *an epicure, a door, a messenger*. After the opening "hear him speak," no verb drives the second and third couplets. Nothing happens, and the guard simply gets redefined three times. Each couplet also pairs a longer line with a shorter, clipped one ("a messenger from their last / day in the world"), which gives a steady rhythm of statement and snap. There is no rhyme, which suits the subject: nothing in the poem closes neatly or clicks shut. The indefinite articles matter too. The guard begins as "the prison guard," a particular man, and then becomes "an" and "a," a type, as if he were being handed from one metaphor to the next.

The poem is worth reading for that compression and for what it refuses to settle. It could easily have been a protest or a portrait. Instead it gives us three images and lets them contradict one another: a keeper who talks of freedom, a listener who hoards, a lock that cannot be trusted. The result suggests that a guard is not simply a wall. Because he stands on the line between the shut-in and the free, he is caught up in what passes across it. In six lines, Bonta leaves the reader listening, as the first line asks, for what that man might say next.

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