Greenwashing — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

green ink at the office

life should not be less than half hope

deer in the garden

a letter to my wife telling her my mind

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The poem is built from four small moments set side by side, with no explanation linking them. The title, "Greenwashing," hints at the first: green ink at the office suggests a workplace that dresses itself up as eco-friendly, an image that feels a little hollow. Against that, the speaker offers a quiet, stubborn belief: life should be at least half hope. The wording is modest. He doesn't ask for a life full of hope, only that hope make up half of it.

Then the scene shifts to deer in the garden, something real and unmanufactured, a bit of actual nature wandering into view. The poem ends with a letter to his wife, "telling her my mind," which suggests honesty and a wish to say what he really thinks.

The mood is thoughtful and gently weary, but not bitter. The gaps between the lines let the reader feel the contrast between pretend greenness at work and the genuine things at home: wildlife, hope, and plain speech between two people.

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