Epithalamium, with images from the Brothers Grimm — Summary

Dave BontaInspired

Prince Charming A bad week. She swallowed pills, eight little erasers

& while she lay on the floor with her mind elsewhere, the golden Lab

brought his famished tongue across her face. Unclipped toe-

nails click on the cold linoleum as the dog goes

to his bed, comes back for another lick, & finally begins to nibble.

He starts with the lips, like any faithful lover. That faint half-smile.


Mirror, mirror The only mirror she kept in her apartment lies face-down when not in use.

Every day she checks a small flag of skin that the doctors implanted

right above her navel: white or gray would signal surrender. Every day

when she pulls up her blouse, she feels something turn over inside,

some phantom embryo forming without nose or chin, the mouth

a permanent wound no lips can ever hope to zipper shut.


Cinderella story The organ donor’s face comes slowly back to life.

Too young to have had laugh lines or crows’ feet,

it was smooth & as firm at first as a glass slipper.

Now, after the delicate diplomacy of scalpel and suture,

the awkward wedding over, it slowly fills once again with feeling,

softens in the heat of an unfamiliar dance.

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Dave Bonta takes three fairy-tale scenes and sets them in a hard, modern world of overdose, surgery, and recovery. In the first section, a woman who has swallowed pills lies unconscious while her dog licks her face and then begins to nibble at her lips. The "faithful lover" and "faint half-smile" are darkly ironic: the prince's kiss becomes something animal and horrifying. In the second, she seems to be a transplant patient, checking a small patch of skin each day for signs of rejection. The mirror turned face-down suggests she can't bear to look at herself, and the "phantom embryo" without nose or chin hints at a face that isn't quite hers. The third shifts to the donor's face, which slowly comes alive in its new owner. Surgery becomes a "wedding," and the face warms like a dancer.

The tone moves from bleak and unsettling to something quietly hopeful, though the poem never lets us forget how strange and painful this rebirth is.

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