Shark week — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I am the thin fin in the tide

to point is better than to impose

excuse me but I must find as much time as the weather to let be

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A shark's fin cutting the water is one of the most loaded images in popular culture, and Dave Bonta uses it to say something gentle. The speaker is not the shark. He is only "the thin / fin in the tide", the small visible part of something whose bulk stays hidden. The title, "Shark week", recalls the annual television event and its appetite for fear and spectacle. Against that, the poem offers a fin that does not threaten anyone. It only indicates.

That choice shapes the opening. "I am the thin" breaks off after its adjective, so "thin" hangs there for a moment as if it were a noun, a bare quality with nothing attached. The next line completes it, and the two lines are matched in length, four syllables each. The sounds are tightly packed: "thin," "fin" and "in" almost rhyme, and the long vowel of "tide" opens the sound out like a wave after the clipped short *i*s. Nothing else in the poem rhymes, so this early chiming stands out as the one moment of tight music before the poem loosens.

The single middle line, "to point is better than to impose", is the idea the image has been preparing. A fin points, and the verb quietly turns the picture into a statement about how to behave. To point is to direct someone's attention and leave them free to look, while to impose is to press a meaning onto them. The line is the plainest in the poem, almost an aphorism, and its rhythm is a steady near-iambic walk of about nine syllables that sounds like a principle. It also works as a statement about poetry. A poem that only points trusts its reader, and a poem that imposes explains itself to death. Bonta's poem does the first, since it never says what the fin signals or what lies beneath it.

The last stanza changes the tone completely. "excuse me but I must find" is the voice of someone politely leaving a crowded room, and after the drama of the shark it is a little comic. What the speaker must find is "as much time as the weather / to let be". The comparison is unusual. Weather does not hurry or keep a schedule, and its patience is the opposite of a "week" packaged for viewing. The tide in the first stanza belongs to the same unhurried order. The speaker wants to step out of human time, with its deadlines and its hunger for attention, and into something slower.

The line breaks help. "I must find" stops mid-thought, so that finding time feels like effort, and then the lines shorten: a longer line about the weather, then "to let be", three single-syllable words that fall slowly and almost equally stressed. "Let be" also has no object. It does not say what is to be left alone, so the phrase simply lets everything be, and the grammar behaves as the speaker wants to.

The poem's form follows its subject. It has no capital letters after the pronoun "I" and no punctuation at all, not even a full stop at the end, so it seems to drift off and the tide could carry on past the page. It is also short, with only a little of it above the surface. A reader can take it as a comment on the noise of modern attention, as a small statement of how to write, or as a mood of withdrawal from the demand to react to everything. The poem supports each reading and insists on none, which is its point.

Its significance lies in that match between what it says and how it behaves. Many poems argue for restraint at length. This one does it in a handful of lines, borrows a frightening image and makes it humble, and ends by stepping away.

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