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Dave BontaRomantic

We were alone in the darkness on the top deck of the ferry coming back from Shikoku, the two of us wrapped in a single windbreaker, me thinking about the ex-governor who had sailed a thousand years before into this same headwind, rocked & buffeted, who for some reason envisioned a woman in his stead — the log she would keep, the songs & poems she would salt it with — & she, whose name signified safety, place of refuge, thinking perhaps that I was proving more difficult than she had imagined.

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A couple huddle together under one windbreaker on a ferry's top deck, heading back from Shikoku. The speaker's mind drifts to an ex-governor who crossed the same waters a thousand years earlier. The poem seems to allude to the idea of a man imagining a woman as the author of a travel log, filled with songs and poems. I can't say for certain which historical figure Bonta has in mind, so it's safest to read this as the speaker's own reflection on that old voyage.

The ending turns the poem toward the speaker himself. The woman beside him has a name that means safety or refuge, and the speaker guesses she may be thinking he is harder to deal with than she expected. The mood is intimate but gently wry. There is warmth in the shared jacket, yet also self-mockery: while she is right there with him, he is lost in the past, and the poem suggests that this distance is exactly what she is noticing.

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