(In)attentive — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

mind fixed on my art I have been silent and given little of myself

the moon at noon is a brother to no one

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The speaker admits to a quiet kind of guilt. Absorbed in making art, they have gone silent and held back from other people, giving "little of myself." The title, "(In)attentive," captures the tension: being attentive to one's work can mean being inattentive to everyone else, and the parentheses make the two words sit awkwardly together.

The second stanza turns to an image. The moon at noon is a pale, faint shape in a bright daytime sky, out of place and easy to overlook. Calling it "a brother / to no one" suggests isolation, as if it belongs to no family and has no companion. The speaker seems to see themselves in it: present but barely noticed, and cut off from others by their own devotion to work.

The mood is reflective and a little wistful. There's no dramatic complaint, just a calm recognition of what concentration costs. The poem's brevity and spare lines echo the silence it describes.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss