Shapeshifter — Poem analysis

ringing bells speak to me stories undo me

who could refrain from the temptation to imitate birds and dogs

to home ourselves in the bone

and see how many there were on the other side

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Eight short lines, four couplets, no capital letters and not a single punctuation mark: Dave Bonta's "Shapeshifter" looks as though it might blow away if you breathed on it. Yet it carries a large idea. Being human, the poem suggests, is less a fixed state than a habit of listening, and if you listen closely enough you begin to turn into what you hear.

The first couplet sets the terms. "ringing bells speak to me / stories undo me." Bells and stories are the active forces here, and the speaker is the one acted upon. What they do is odd, too. Bells ring; they don't speak. Hearing speech in pure sound is already a small act of shapeshifting, one kind of thing perceived as another. "Undo" is the stronger verb. It suggests a knot loosened or a stitch pulled, as if a story doesn't merely entertain but unravels the tidy, settled self. Both lines end on "me", the closest the poem comes to rhyme. The effect is of call and response, a bell and its echo.

The second couplet turns outward with a question that has no question mark: "who could refrain from the temptation / to imitate birds and dogs". Without the punctuation it reads less like an inquiry than a shrug, a cheerful confession that of course no one could. "Temptation" is a word from sermons, and the poem applies it to something innocent, the childlike urge to whistle or bark. "Refrain" is quietly double. It means to hold back, but a refrain is also the repeated line of a song, which keeps the bells in earshot. The creatures are well chosen as a pair, one wild and airborne, one domestic and earthbound, so the range of possible imitation feels wide. The hard consonants of "birds and dogs" (b, d, d, g) also sound blunt and physical after the soft, liquid "ringing bells".

Then comes the pivot: "to home ourselves / in the bone." The singular "me" has become "ourselves", so the private experience is now a shared one. "Home" used as a verb is unexpected. Judging by the imagery, it may nod to homing birds, so that the poem circles back to the creatures it has just named. It also treats the body as a house to be settled into rather than a cage to be escaped. Bone is what remains when skin, fur and feathers are stripped away. Birds, dogs and people differ in their outer shapes but share that inner scaffolding. On this reading, shapeshifting is less a disguise than a move inward, to the structure beneath the surface. The line "in the bone" is the shortest in the poem, and it lands with a thud.

The last couplet loosens everything again: "and see how many there were / on the other side". The tense slips into the past, and the sentence never says how many of what. It never says which side either. It could be the far side of the line between species, or the far side of the bone, and since bone is what outlasts the living, perhaps the far side of death. Taking that last reading as an inference rather than a fact, the "many" might be a crowd of earlier lives, voices or selves. The poem leaves the question open and ends on the word "side", a threshold, with no full stop to close it. That fits, because a ringing bell fades out rather than stopping dead.

Part of the poem's interest lies in how little it explains. Its title names an identity, "Shapeshifter", but the text never describes a transformation. The change happens in the gaps between couplets: from hearing to being undone, from temptation to imitation, from the body to what lies beyond it. Reading it aloud is a small version of the same act. You ring, you bark, you whisper, and you borrow a voice for a moment. In eight lines it argues that stories, sounds and mimicry are ways of getting out of ourselves, and perhaps of getting home.

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