Fortunes — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

i put a single stem of beebalm – bright red shaggy head – in a green, wide- bottomed wine bottle & set it outside to see if the hummingbirds would come

the first summer crickets playing their rasps pick right up where they left off at the intermission, going on as if this brief stage were the whole of it

if you come for pizza bring a bar of ayurvedic soap a cut flower from your garden & a jar of cold soup – so thinks my friend L. who gives & gives from what little she has & calls herself lucky to be able to spare so much

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Three small scenes sit side by side here, and each one is about making something modest feel like enough. In the first, the speaker puts a single beebalm flower in a wine bottle and sets it outside, hoping hummingbirds will come. It's a quiet experiment, hopeful but low-stakes. Then the crickets of early summer start up again as if they had only paused for an intermission, carrying on as though "this brief stage / were the whole of it." The line hints at how short the season is, and at the odd comfort of creatures who don't know it.

The last scene turns to a friend, L., who invites people over for pizza and asks them to bring humble things: soap, a flower, a jar of soup. She gives generously from very little and calls herself lucky. The mood is warm, gentle and a little wistful. The poem seems to admire a way of living in which small gifts, brief songs and simple lures are plenty.

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