Planting sang — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Sing a song of sang, that human root: wrinkled homunculus growing slow as thought. Even the seeds take twenty months to sprout, stones that finish growing in the ground as if traveling through the interminable gut of some great beast that vanished in the Pleistocene. Sing a song of burying in haste, the berries’ flesh a tempting prize for mold. So if picked on a morning in early September, nestled into a plastic vial & sent by overnight mail, you must plant them as soon as they arrive — don’t put it off till after supper.

Choose each resting-place with care, moving slowly through the woods & stopping often. Pretend you’re burying a grandparent, piece by piece. Make a hole with your index finger no deeper than the second knuckle, drop the blood-colored berry in & cover it up. Pray for uninterrupted sleep, & an end to sleep. Let your stomach rumble, soft & low.

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The poem reads as a set of planting instructions for "sang," the Appalachian word for ginseng, a root often said to look like a small human figure. The speaker moves between song and practical advice: plant the berries right away, because they can rot, and don't wait until after supper. The seeds are slow, taking twenty months to sprout, and the poem compares them to stones that keep growing as if they had passed through the gut of some vanished prehistoric animal.

What the speaker feels is a mix of patience and reverence. Planting becomes something close to a funeral, as the poem tells us to pretend we are burying a grandparent piece by piece. The red berry is "blood-colored," and the prayer for "uninterrupted sleep, & an end to sleep" suggests both dormancy and death, but also waking. The mood is quiet and ritual-like, a little eerie, yet oddly tender. The last line, with a rumbling stomach, brings the body and the earth together.

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