Vacant — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

nothing to signify nothing I make a meme

simple yet right like an evening in the country

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Seventeen words, four short lines, and still the poem manages a small argument about what it means to say anything at all. Its speaker has nothing to say, and the opening line, "nothing to signify nothing", won't tell us which kind of nothing. Without a verb to anchor it, the line can mean that there is nothing to signify, or that whatever is signified amounts to nothing. It can even mean that nothing itself is the thing to be signified. Then comes the plain, decisive act: "I make a meme."

That word is the hinge of the poem. "Meme" was coined by Richard Dawkins in 1976 for a unit of culture that copies itself from mind to mind, and today most people picture a captioned image passed around online. In both senses a meme lives by circulation rather than depth. A meme made out of nothing is therefore oddly fitting, since it is a thing built to travel that needn't carry much. The first line also can't help recalling Macbeth's "signifying nothing". Judging by the phrasing, the echo may be deliberate, though the mood has changed. Macbeth's emptiness is despair, while here it sounds closer to a shrug, even a contented one.

The title, "Vacant", pulls in both directions. We usually meet the word on empty rooms, unoccupied seats and blank stares, and it normally implies lack. The second stanza turns it around. "Simple yet right" is a small surprise, because the "yet" admits that we expect simplicity to fall short of rightness. The poem insists it needn't. Then the simile leaps from the screen to the landscape: "like an evening in the country." Bonta gives no birds, no light, no weather, so the evening stays a blank that readers furnish from their own memories. The simile is itself vacant in the best sense, an open room rather than an abandoned one.

The construction backs this up quietly. There are two couplets, no rhyme and no punctuation. The only capital is the "I", which stands out in a poem otherwise set in lowercase. The line lengths run roughly seven syllables, four, four, then eight, a mirrored shape that pinches in at the centre and opens out again at the close, as though the poem were exhaling. Sound ties the halves together. The "s" of "signify" returns in "simple", and the long "e" in "meme" comes back in "evening", so the digital word and the pastoral one share a vowel. The doubled "nothing" of the first line works like an echo, and repeating itself is exactly what memes do.

The missing punctuation also leaves "simple yet right" floating. It could describe the meme, the act of making it, or the nothing the poem began with. Because no full stop settles the matter, the reader decides what is simple and what is right, and the poem asks for that kind of participation. We complete the evening, and we choose the meaning of the nothing.

The poem's significance lies in how much it holds without strain. It touches on a very current condition: the habit of producing and sharing things when we have nothing in particular to say. It neither scolds that habit nor cheers it on. Instead, it finds an unexpected calm in it, the way an evening can feel complete without anything happening. The poem is also, in its own way, what it describes. It is short, easy to carry and easy to pass along, yet it leaves a pause behind. Having made so little, it asks whether little might be enough, and the final image suggests the answer is yes.

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