Boxman — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

with a box of carpenter’s tools I will make many boxes

one for serpents another devils and one like a suit I might dance in

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A carpenter's toolbox is a humble thing, and Dave Bonta's "Boxman" starts from exactly that humility. The speaker has "a box of carpenter's tools" and a plan: "I will make many boxes." The poem is only five lines long, yet it moves from plain workshop practicality to something stranger and more playful. Its central idea is that making is a way of dealing with what frightens us, and that the same skill that shuts danger away can also build something we can live and move in.

Notice first how the poem folds in on itself. The tools arrive in a box, and the tools make more boxes, so the object is already multiplying in the opening couplet. The title "Boxman" fits this. It doesn't name a job or a character so much as a whole identity built around one shape. The speaker is defined by the box.

The list that follows seems at first to continue in the same spirit. Boxes are for keeping things in, and what this speaker wants to keep in them is "serpents" and "devils." These words belong to the language of myth and folklore (the serpent is especially familiar from biblical tradition), so the poem suddenly stretches from a workbench to a battle with evil. The contrast is part of the humour and the force. Nobody expects a carpenter's hammer to be a weapon against devils, yet that is exactly the poem's proposal: ordinary craft as defence against the extraordinary.

The grammar of the list is worth a close look. "One for serpents" is complete and tidy. "Another devils" drops the "for," as if the speaker, warming to the work, is working faster than the sentence can keep up. The phrasing is slightly off-balance, and that gives the line a spoken, improvised feel. It also quietly suggests that these boxes are being tossed off in a rush of confidence rather than carefully planned.

Then comes the turn. "And one like a suit I might dance in." Two things change at once. The preposition "for" gives way to "like," so this box is no longer a container for something else but is compared to clothing. And the contents are no longer a threat at all. The box is now something the speaker could step into. A suit is a box shaped to a body, and this one is meant for movement. The earlier boxes were static and defensive. This one is wearable, a costume or even a kind of armour that has become light enough for dancing. The poem seems to say that the best response to serpents and devils is not only to lock them up but to make something you can be joyful inside.

The verbs carry a further shift. "I will make" is flat certainty, while "I might dance" is open and tentative. The speaker is sure of the work but not of the pleasure, which stays a possibility. That small change from "will" to "might" gives the ending its lightness and keeps it from sounding like a boast.

The sound and shape of the poem support this movement. There is no rhyme and no punctuation, and the lines are short, in the manner of a quick note or a spell. The lines first contract ("one for serpents," "another devils"), then expand into the longest line of the poem, the one about the suit. The words "tools" and "suit" echo each other in their long *oo* sound, linking the instrument of making to the thing finally made. The sibilance of "serpents" and "devils," each sliding through an *s* or *v* sound, hisses slightly, as if the contents are audible even before they are boxed. And the poem ends on "in," a small preposition left hanging with no full stop, so the speaker is caught mid-motion, still inside the suit, still dancing.

What makes "Boxman" worth reading is how much it does with so little. In a handful of plain words it offers a way of looking at creativity: the maker contains fears through craft, then keeps going and builds something to celebrate in. A school reader might come away asking what their own boxes would hold, and which one they would choose to wear.

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