Spell for a widow-maker — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Snag turned deadfall, dread widow-maker with your fag-ends caught in the crotch of a living tree, hold fast while the chainsaw gnaws through your limb, don’t pinch the bar in your haste to get free, but as soon as the uppercut meets the undercut, drop straight, don’t twist or kick. Sink into the soft mulch of your many autumns, the bed you made for just this final fall.

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Dave Bonta's poem speaks directly to a dead tree that has fallen and become snagged in a living one, the kind of hazard loggers call a widow-maker. The speaker seems to be a person with a chainsaw, and the poem works like a charm or set of instructions. It coaxes the tree to cooperate: hold steady while the saw cuts, don't pinch the blade, and once the cuts meet, drop straight without twisting or kicking.

What's striking is the tenderness mixed in with the practical advice. The speaker addresses the tree almost as a dangerous but familiar companion, asking it to behave. The tone is calm, careful, and a little reverent. The ending shifts from warning to comfort, picturing the tree sinking into the soft mulch of its own past autumns, a bed it has been preparing all along. Death here feels natural and even gentle. The mood is quiet respect, with the tension of real danger underneath.

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