Light verses — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

light on a fence I believe in the clock

light on the wharf we consume to no purpose

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Four short lines, two small scenes, and two flat statements that sound almost like confessions. Each stanza sets a glimpse of light on a place against a remark about how people live. The central idea is never spelled out, but it seems to be this: light falls on the world freely and without comment, and in its plain glare we can see how much we trust measured time and how carelessly we use things up. The title, "Light verses," plays on this. It nods to "light verse," the playful kind of poetry, while also announcing verses about light. The poem is slight on the surface and not at all light underneath.

The construction rests on repetition and a single change. Both stanzas open with "light on," and only the nouns shift: "a fence" becomes "the wharf." That move from "a" to "the" is small but telling. The first fence could be any fence, while the wharf feels like a particular place the speaker knows. The pronouns shift too, from "I believe" to "we consume." A private creed widens into a shared accusation, and the speaker, who says "I" in the first stanza, ends up included in the "we" of the second. There is no rhyme and no punctuation, so nothing sounds neat or final. By my count the image lines run to four syllables each and the statements to six and seven, so the second admission runs a little longer, as if it were harder to finish. The end words, "fence" and "purpose," share a closing hiss, a faint echo that frames the poem without drawing attention to itself.

The imagery works by suggestion. A fence marks a boundary, something ordinary and domestic, and light resting on it is the most unremarkable sight imaginable. Yet it leads straight into "I believe in the clock." The phrasing is borrowed from the language of a creed, and the object of belief is a machine for dividing the day into units. There is gentle irony here. Long before clocks, moving light was how people read the hours, so a speaker who watches light on a fence and then declares faith in the clock has swapped the original timekeeper for its mechanical copy. The line can be read as sincere, wry or resigned, and the poem refuses to say which.

The wharf shifts the mood. A wharf is a place of arrival, departure, loading and trade, and the vocabulary follows: "consume" belongs to the language of economics. It also means to burn up or use up, and since light is what burning gives off, the verb may glance back at the image. That is an inference, but the word does seem to carry more than one meaning. The phrase "to no purpose" is delivered without protest or exclamation. Nothing is shouted, and the lack of emphasis makes the judgment sound more settled and harder to argue with.

What connects the two stanzas is left to the reader, and this is where the poem becomes interesting. One possibility is that belief in the clock and purposeless consumption are linked. If we live by scheduled, counted time, we also learn to treat time and everything else as something to be spent. Another is that the light, which is given freely and asks nothing in return, makes a quiet contrast with human activity that takes and uses up without knowing why. The poem supports both readings without forcing either.

Its significance lies in this economy. In only a few words it sets image against statement, singular against plural, and a fixed point of belief against a drifting sense of waste. The white space between the stanzas does much of the thinking. The poem does not tell us what to feel about the clock or the wharf, and it trusts the reader to notice that the same light falls on both. A useful exercise is to swap the two statements and see how the poem changes. "I believe in the clock" beside the wharf feels more like a trader's boast, while "we consume to no purpose" beside the fence sounds like a quiet domestic regret. The fact that the lines behave differently in each position shows how carefully this small poem has been balanced.

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