Lepidopterist — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I wait like a guitar for the sacrament of an ear

nobody can tell the truth of a moth lost in the busy night

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A lepidopterist studies butterflies and moths, so the title promises nets, specimen boxes and Latin names. Dave Bonta's five lines give us none of that. They give us a speaker who waits and a moth that nobody can pin down in words. The title sets up an expectation of collecting and classifying, and the poem quietly undoes it.

The opening image is the strangest: "I wait like a guitar / for the sacrament of an ear." Look at what the guitar is waiting for. The obvious answer would be a hand, since hands play instruments. The speaker wants an ear, and so wants to be heard rather than played. "Sacrament" lifts that wish into religious territory. A sacrament is a rite in which something ordinary becomes charged with meaning, and here listening is that rite. Without a listener the guitar is only wood and strings, and the speaker only a person with something unsaid. "Wait" is the speaker's only action, and it is a passive one. That suits a lepidopterist, since watching for moths in the dark must involve a great deal of patience.

The second stanza turns outward: "nobody can tell / the truth of a moth / lost in the busy night." The verb "tell" works in two ways. It can mean to discern, so that nobody can know the moth's truth. It can also mean to recount, so that nobody can put that truth into words. The lineation encourages both readings, because "nobody can tell" is a complete, bleak statement before the next line arrives. The poem has no punctuation at all, which leaves these meanings free to overlap instead of settling on one.

The poem has no rhyme, but a few sounds chime faintly. "Truth" and "moth" end on the same breathy *th*, as if the abstract word and the small creature were stuck together. "Guitar" and "ear" close on a shared *r*, which links the instrument to the body part that completes it. The rhythm is plain and speech-like, but the lines tighten. The second line of the opening couplet is the longest, at about eight syllables. The three lines of the second stanza shrink to five, five and six. The poem seems to lose confidence and volume as it goes, which suits its subject.

"Lost in the busy night" is the most unsettling phrase. We usually think of night as still and empty. Here it is "busy," crowded with movement we can't see, and a single moth is easily overlooked. "Lost" is also open. It might mean disoriented, as moths are often pictured circling lights, or simply out of our sight. The word "busy" may also hint at the human world. Busyness is what stops us listening, and listening is exactly what the guitar needs.

The poem never explains how its two stanzas connect, and the white space between them is part of the point. Reading across the gap, we find two things that exist fully only when someone pays attention. The guitar is silent until it is heard, and the moth's truth stays untold until it is noticed. The speaker belongs to both stanzas. He is the guitar hoping for an ear, and he is also the watcher who admits that watching is not the same as knowing. The only capital letter is the "I" in the opening line, and the poem ends on "night" with no full stop. It finishes unresolved, still waiting.

Its significance lies in how much it holds in so few words. Collecting and naming suggest ownership of knowledge, but the poem treats knowing as something closer to attentiveness, and it admits that language falls short of a living creature. Yet the poem is itself an act of telling, a small instrument set down in front of the reader. If it is a guitar waiting for an ear, then we are the ear, and reading becomes the sacrament it asks for.

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