The burning — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

burning the otherland are we on the side of light

is the man with all ink right to let witches become a sun

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Four lines, no punctuation, and two questions that the poem refuses to answer: Dave Bonta's «The burning» is built to leave its reader uncomfortable. Nothing in it names a date, a place or an occasion, so it is best read on its own terms. Read that way, it asks whether destroying something can be justified by the name we give the destroyer, and who gets to choose that name.

The first line, "burning the otherland", is a fragment with no subject. Who is burning? The participle could be an accusation, a report or a confession. The title turns "burning" into a noun, a thing that happened. The opening line turns it back into an action that is still going on. "Otherland" is a compound that sounds slightly invented. Its first half, "other," carries the whole logic of persecution: a place or people becomes a target once it is defined as not-us. Judging by the imagery of the second couplet, the otherland is probably where the "witches" live, though the poem never says so.

Then comes the pivot: "are we on the side of light". The pronoun "we" pulls the reader into the crime. The speaker could have asked what "they" were doing, but chose a plural that includes everyone reading. The phrase "side of light" is the language of people who are sure of their own goodness, and with no question mark the line sounds almost like a slogan until the grammar, with its inverted "are we," shows it is doubt. The poem also sets up a pun it never states. Fire gives light, so a burning might claim to be on the side of light literally as well as morally.

The second couplet moves from "we" to a distant third person: "the man with all ink". The phrase is odd and exact. It suggests someone who holds a monopoly on writing, the one who records, names and decides how events are remembered. Ink is dark, yet it is what makes things legible, so it quietly rivals the "light" of the line before. The word "right" does double duty. Is the man correct, or does he have the right? The poem asks both questions at once.

The final line, "to let witches become a sun", is the strangest and the most open. The verb "let" makes the transformation sound like a favor granted by the man with the ink. Plural witches become one sun, so many individual victims merge into a single blazing object. This can be read two ways. It may be tribute, with the burned turned into a source of light and the pyre made into a star. It may also be a bitter charge that the writer's art can make atrocity beautiful and so make it easier to bear. The poem does not choose. The ambiguity is its argument, because the same act of storytelling can honor the dead or tidy up after the people who killed them.

The sound of the poem reinforces this. Lines run six, seven, seven and eight syllables, widening slightly as they go, so the last line seems to lift and open, like the sun it names. The only full rhyme, "light" and "right," falls across the stanza break and ties the two questions together. The words are also the two moral terms the poem tests: being right and being in the light. Everything else is plain, short and mostly one syllable, with "otherland" and "witches" standing out. The lowercase, unpunctuated lines have no signal that tells us where a statement ends or what the answer is.

The poem is significant because it does so much in so little space. It compresses a whole argument about power, narrative and violence into two questions, and it makes the reader complicit in asking them. Its imagery of fire, ink and sun is simple, but it shows how easily destruction can be recast as illumination. The poem leaves us to decide whether the sun at the end is a memorial or a cover story.

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