Decluttering — Summary

amber to enter this ember in the fire

I enter noon and night burning all unnecessary letters

I have my years backward I have nothing fit to be seen

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Despite its title, "Decluttering" feels less like tidying a room and more like stripping a self down to almost nothing. The first lines play with sound: "amber" and "ember" are one letter apart, so the word itself seems to glow and turn into fire as we read. The speaker then imagines burning "all unnecessary letters," which sounds like editing language itself, cutting a word down until only its essential core is left.

That idea of shedding spreads to the speaker's own life. "I have my years backward" suggests a sense of time being out of order, perhaps feeling old and young at once, or looking back more than forward. The last line, "I have nothing fit to be seen," lands as a quiet admission of bareness, even shame, though it could also mean freedom from show. The mood is spare, warm and a little uneasy. Fire gives light, but it also destroys, and the poem leaves both possibilities open.

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