Onward and upward — Summary

Dave BontaInspired

the garden grows every day another ladder into night

I come up hungry to begin to be

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Dave Bonta's short poem turns a garden into something that feels almost alive and ambitious. Each day, the plants add "another ladder into night," as if growth were a staircase reaching toward the dark sky. It's a strange, lovely image: gardens usually seem to belong to daylight, yet here they stretch upward into night.

The second stanza shifts to the speaker, who "come[s] up hungry / to begin / to be." The word "up" echoes the garden's climbing, so the speaker seems to rise in the same way the plants do. The hunger isn't described as sad or desperate. It reads more like a basic drive, a wanting that pushes a person toward existence itself. The short, broken lines make "to begin / to be" feel like a slow breath or a first step.

The mood is quiet, wondering, and hopeful. Judging by the imagery, the poem links human longing with the steady, unstoppable pull of growing things.

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