Next Door to Dorothy — Summary

Next door to Dorothy, there’s another girl who stays behind in Kansas, who sleeps through storms, her father a slab-faced drunk, mother vicious with regret for this brood she should have drowned at birth, because they so distract her from her spells & weather-making. The daughter hides in her bed & petitions the great and powerful wizard for a way out.

Thirty years on, oblivion doesn’t seem any closer. She has two kids of her own, now, who creep quietly past her bedroom door. A tornado comes & makes off with the neighbor’s roof. Sirens, helicopters. She stirs awake. Why couldn’t it have been me, my house, she asks the crack in the ceiling.

Oz is only three clicks of the mouse away, & the fact that it’s no place like home is an inducement to visit often. But we read her latest messages & lose our appetite for dancing in circles. Weeds sprout between the yellow bricks. Maybe I should retrieve that old heart from its safe-deposit box? I lie awake shivering as the first serious snowstorm of the year turns the world back to black & white.

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Bonta imagines the story *The Wizard of Oz* from the other side of the fence: a neighbor girl who never gets swept away. Her home is frightening, with a drunk father and a mother who resents her children. She prays to the wizard for an escape, but none comes. Decades later she is a mother herself, her kids tiptoeing past her door as she once must have tiptoed past her parents'. When a tornado destroys a neighbor's roof, she wishes it had taken her house instead.

In the last stanza the poem shifts to "we," the online present, where Oz is only a few clicks away. Reading her messages kills the fun of the fantasy, and the road is overgrown with weeds. The speaker feels shaken and guilty, wondering whether to reclaim the heart he has locked away. The mood is bleak and quietly tender. The closing snowstorm turns the world "black & white," like Kansas before the color of Oz, and there is no magic to leave for.

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