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Dave BontaContemplative

Another New Year, 8:30 a.m. Like a bear making claw marks on a telephone pole, I decide to take roll.

Low-flying geese, solitary crow, squirrel on the head of a concrete dog, the fog.

Here, I answer. Here.

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On the first morning of a new year, the speaker steps outside and does something playful: takes attendance of the world. The opening image, a bear scratching claw marks into a telephone pole, suggests a small, instinctive act of marking territory or making a presence known. The speaker decides to "take roll" in much the same spirit.

The roll call itself is modest. Geese flying low, a lone crow, a squirrel perched on a concrete dog statue, and fog. Nothing grand happens, and that seems to be the point. The list ends abruptly on "the fog," which is hard to count or call by name, so it feels a little like a joke and a little like a quiet blur around everything.

Then the speaker answers their own name: "Here. / Here." The repetition feels humble and a bit wry, but also sincere. The mood is calm, gently humorous, and watchful, a person simply showing up for a new year and noticing who else is present.

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