Recharge — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

morning comes with no batteries but the wren and the wren

while we hope to have more they live in the present

which is like the sea safe and green

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Morning, in Dave Bonta's "Recharge," arrives like a delivery that has gone slightly wrong: it comes "with no batteries." Anyone who has unwrapped a present and found the toy dead will recognise that small letdown. But the poem swerves at once. What morning does bring is "the wren and the wren," and in six short lines that substitute grows into an argument about how to live.

The central idea is a contrast between two ways of handling time. "We" are creatures of storage and anticipation: we "hope to have more." The poem never says more of what, and the vagueness is the point. More charge, more energy, more hours all fit. The wrens, by contrast, "live in the present." A battery is a packet of saved-up future, energy held back for later. A bird singing at dawn is spending its energy right now. So the title quietly changes meaning. Recharging is no longer a matter of plugging something in but of being fully awake inside the moment, as the birds are.

The form supports this. The poem is three unrhymed couplets with no punctuation and no capital letters, so it never closes a sentence with a full stop. The lines also shrink as they go, from seven syllables to six, then five, then three. The poem settles like someone lowering themselves into a chair, and it ends on "safe and green," two stressed words side by side that force a slow, unhurried landing. The vocabulary shifts too. "Batteries" is the only clumsy, manufactured, three-syllable word, and after it almost everything is short and plain: wren, sea, green, safe. The language moves from the factory to the garden.

The repeated phrase "the wren and the wren" is the poem's most playful move. Ordinarily a list names different things, so repeating one item is a small joke. It also works as music. It could be two birds answering each other across a yard, or one bird saying its piece twice, which suits small birds with big, rapid voices. The word "wren" repeats like a pulse, and a pulse is a kind of charge. The poem's own energy comes from that echo rather than from any grand statement.

The little word "while" does a lot of work. It means "whereas," setting our hoping against the birds' living, but it also means "during." As we hope for more, the wrens are already getting on with it. The tenses join in: comes, hope, live, is. Every verb is in the present, so the poem practises what it describes.

The final image is the strangest. "Which is like the sea / safe and green." The sea is usually vast, unpredictable and blue, yet Bonta gives it two qualities that turn that picture upside down. Green may recall the leaves where a wren would sing, so the "sea" might be partly a sea of foliage, though that is an inference from the colour. The grammar of "which" is also loose. It could point back to the present itself or to the act of living in it, and either reading works. The sea is something you are inside rather than something you hold. You cannot put it in a battery, and it renews itself without help. "Safe" is the revealing word. Worry belongs almost entirely to "more," to the future. In the present, where the wrens live, nothing has gone wrong yet.

The poem matters because of how little it needs. It borrows the compression and the quick turn of haiku without following its syllable count, and it does not lecture. It simply sets a gadget word, "recharge," beside a small brown bird (the poem does not give the wren's colour, but the contrast is clear) and lets the reader feel the difference. We often use the vocabulary of devices about ourselves, saying we are drained or need to recharge. The poem hands that word back to something alive. There is a gentle irony, too, in reading it on a screen that probably needs plugging in before the day is out.

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