Diagnostic — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

I sat on the ground because that’s what the boulder was doing. It seemed only right.

I laid down on my back in the leaf duff so I could join the giant oak tree in tracking the sun.

But this was a woods with a clear view beneath the canopy, everything but the rocks & ferns reduced to telltale pellets. I should’ve kept my distance.

On the way home, three times I felt something on the side of my face & couldn’t dislodge it.

Hours later, at supper, a tiny, red & black barnacle of an insect dropped from my collar & began inching across the table: a deer tick. My thumb came down

& crushed it against the smooth white wood. Clear views are dangerous here. Only a sick forest can harbor such distances.

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A speaker goes into the woods and tries to fit in. He sits on the ground because a boulder does, and lies back in the leaf litter to follow the sun the way an oak does. It's a gentle, almost humble way of belonging to the place.

Then the mood shifts. The woods are open and easy to see through, but the poem hints that something has been stripped away: everything except rocks and ferns has been "reduced to telltale pellets," which suggests deer have eaten the undergrowth. The speaker feels something on his face on the way home, and later a deer tick drops from his collar onto the supper table. He crushes it.

The final lines turn the small scare into a warning. A clear view looks pleasant, but here it signals sickness. The title fits: the tick is a symptom, and the speaker's calm, wary tone makes the ending quietly unsettling.

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