Types of war — Poem analysis

lone stone war

state fit war

own pain war

old ore war

Lord Chance war

heat hate war

news night war

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Seven lines, twenty-one words, and one of them never changes. Dave Bonta's "Types of war" looks like a page from a field guide, a tidy list of species with a two-word label for each. The longer you look, though, the less the list sorts anything. The only constant is the last word, and it wins every time.

The title promises the calm vocabulary of a naturalist or a librarian, and the poem keeps to that discipline. Every line has the same shape: two modifiers, then "war." Every word is a single syllable, so the poem moves in blunt, heavily stressed beats, closer to hammering than to singing. Because "war" lands at the end of every line, it works like a refrain, or a stamp coming down on a form. The descriptions change while the noun stays put. That is the poem's central idea: we invent endless reasons, moods and categories for war, but underneath them it is the same event.

Some of the labels invite interpretation. "Lone stone war" suggests the oldest weapon and the simplest fight, one person and one thrown rock. "Old ore war" points to conflict over what is dug out of the ground, and "old" implies the quarrel is ancient. One might even hear "gold ore" with its first letter dropped, though that is a guess. "Own pain war" turns inward, to a battle with one's own suffering or a violence that grows out of it. "Heat hate war" joins weather and feeling, temperature and temper. "News night war" brings the conflict into the living room, where it arrives at a fixed hour between other programmes. Placed near the end, it quietly implicates the reader as a spectator.

With no punctuation or hyphens, each pair can be read in several ways. "State fit war" might be a war fit for a state, or a war a state throws like a tantrum. "Own" can be an adjective or a verb, as in owning one's pain. "Heat" and "hate" can each be a noun or a verb. The reader has to decide, and the uncertainty is part of the meaning, because the causes of war are never as clean as their labels.

Sound does a great deal of the work. There is no rhyme between lines, but nearly every pair of modifiers chimes internally. "Lone" and "stone" rhyme outright. "News night" shares its n-sounds. "State" and "fit" both close on a hard t, and "own pain" fades out on n. "Heat" and "hate" are the same four letters rearranged, so that one shuffle turns warmth into loathing. Meanwhile "ore," "Lord" and "war" share a vowel, so the final word seems to leak backward into the line before it is spoken. The effect is half chant, half playground jingle, which is unsettling given the subject. The rhythm of a children's rhyme carries the most serious word in the language.

The one capital letter in the body of the poem belongs to "Lord Chance." Everything else is lowercase, so this phrase stands out as a title, as if chance were a sovereign, or a rival to the God that "Lord" usually names. War becomes a gamble whose ruler is nobody in particular. The joke is bleak, and it is the closest the poem comes to a verdict.

What makes the poem significant is how much it refuses to say. There are no verbs, no "I," no moral and no argument. It only classifies, in the flat tone of a news ticker, and leaves the reader to feel how inadequate classification is. The list also stops without closing. Seven is not a complete set, and an eighth line could be added without changing the pattern. By being so compact, the poem shows how language makes war manageable, with neat labels and familiar rhythms, while the repeated word shows how little those labels change.

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