Ode to a Magnetic Screwdriver — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

If the part that screws is the head — this X- shaped tip — then the other end must be tail: the shaft rooted in transparent sun- colored plastic like an insect in amber. And considering how the power drill with screwdriver bit has replaced it, this might as well be a relic from the Mesozoic. The tip attracts anything steel, but can only solve for x, descending into the head of the screw like a spirit into someone possessed, spinning like a purpose- driven whirlwind in a desert of wood, inclining ever so slightly toward magnetic north.

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An ode usually rises to its subject on a swell of praise, but Dave Bonta's "Ode to a Magnetic Screwdriver" begins with an "If." The opening is the language of a logic problem: if the part that screws is the head, then the other end must be the tail. It is a deadpan, slightly absurd piece of reasoning, and it is also the poem's first transformation. By granting the screwdriver a head and a tail, Bonta turns a tool into a creature, and the rest of the poem keeps changing what the object is.

The next images follow that creature backward in time. The shaft is "rooted in transparent sun- / colored plastic like / an insect in amber," and a few lines later the whole thing "might as well be / a relic from / the Mesozoic." Both figures make the screwdriver a fossil, something preserved and no longer alive in the everyday world. The reason is given in plain, almost throwaway terms: the power drill "has replaced it." There is a nice irony in the amber, too. Real amber is ancient, hardened resin, while the screwdriver's handle is modern plastic imitating it, a fossil made in a factory. The poem knows its joke is a little ridiculous, which keeps it from sentimentality.

Then the poem turns. "The tip attracts / anything steel, but / can only solve for x." The pun is neat. The tip is X-shaped, and "solve for x" borrows the language of algebra, so the screw becomes the unknown quantity the tool exists to find. The word "only" matters, though. The magnet draws in everything made of steel, yet the tool is single-minded and does one job. That limitation is where the poem finds its dignity. The screwdriver "descend[s] into / the head of the screw / like a spirit / into someone possessed," and the head-and-tail game returns, since the screw has a head too. The mechanical act of driving a screw becomes something close to ritual. The tool is now a spirit entering a body, and the screw is a person given over to it.

The final image widens the scale again. The screwdriver is "spinning like a purpose- / driven whirlwind / in a desert of wood." "Purpose-driven" has a faint corporate, self-improvement ring, and applying it to a whirlwind is gently comic. Still, a whirlwind in a desert is an elemental picture, and a plank of wood becomes a whole landscape. The poem's last move is its quietest: the tool is "inclining ever so slightly / toward magnetic north." The title's adjective finally pays off. A magnet that points north is a compass needle, so the humble object has moved from creature to fossil to spirit to weather to a device for finding direction. After a poem about obsolescence, ending on orientation feels like a small, earned grace.

The form supports this movement. There is no rhyme and no regular meter, only short lines of two to five words, so the voice sounds conversational, like someone thinking aloud over a workbench. Bonta breaks words at their hyphens ("X- / shaped," "sun- / colored," "purpose- / driven"), so the reader has to turn the corner of each line to complete the word, a little like the twist of a screw. Many lines end on weak, unfinished words such as "like," "the," "from" and "but," which pushes the eye steadily down the page. That downward drift suits a poem about "descending." The grammar helps as well. The first half is argument and explanation, while the last lines pile up participles ("descending," "spinning," "inclining"), so the sentence itself begins to rotate. A scatter of s-sounds ("screws," "sun," "spirit," "someone possessed," "spinning") hums through the lines like the tool turning.

What makes the poem worth reading is its refusal to choose between joking and wonder. It admits that the screwdriver is outdated and that the comparison to dinosaurs is silly. Close attention to the object, with enough playfulness to look at it from many angles, makes it strange and a little sacred anyway. The poem suggests that an ode does not need a grand subject, only a patient eye.

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