Ode to Tin Snips — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

Scissors with an overbite, blades like quotation marks devouring the text — some lost codex from the Aluminum Age — & leaving in its place a jagged rent: massively buck-toothed myself, I know how elusive a clean break can be. Despite what orthodontists would have us think, a naturally straight bite is a rare thing. Most of us learn early how to compensate, squaring the circle, holding our heads over whatever plate, baring our lips in the inevitable tin grin.

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Dave Bonta starts with a humble tool, tin snips, and sees a mouth in it. The blades are like scissors with an overbite, and as they cut through metal they seem to chew up a text, like quotation marks swallowing words. What they leave behind is a ragged tear rather than a neat line. That image leads the speaker to a personal admission: he is buck-toothed himself, so he knows how hard a clean break, or a clean fit, can be.

From there the poem widens out. A perfectly straight bite is rare, the speaker says, whatever orthodontists suggest, and most people learn early to compensate, hiding or adjusting their flaws. The final image, the "tin grin," ties the snips to the human smile.

The mood is wry and good-humored, with a gentle fondness for imperfection. The speaker doesn't seem ashamed. He treats awkward teeth, and awkward cuts, as ordinary and even a little comic.

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