Ode to a Crowbar — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

Comma, apostrophe, back- slash, cursive flourish — an all-purpose divider that only accidentally resembles a question mark in search of its dot-like perch. No self-respecting crow, beak clever at leverage, ever departed from the declarative mode. Male & female hand & handle, heavy as Wednesday. What iron tree might ramify if you insinuated yourself into some sidewalk crack? I know that curl from watching seeds sprout: cotyledon at the point of pulling apart.

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Dave Bonta turns a humble tool into a playful puzzle of shapes and sounds. The poem begins by treating the crowbar's curved end like a piece of punctuation: a comma, an apostrophe, a backslash, even a question mark that has lost its dot. Then it jokes that a crow would never ask questions, since the crowbar is all about firm, declarative action. Wordplay on "crow" and "bar" runs through the opening, and the tool becomes "heavy as Wednesday," a nicely odd way to capture a dull, weighty midweek feeling.

The speaker's tone is affectionate and curious. Imagining the crowbar pushed into a sidewalk crack, he wonders whether an "iron tree" might branch out from it. That thought leads to the ending, where the curved end recalls a sprouting seed, a cotyledon just beginning to split apart. The mood is quiet, witty, and observant, finding growth and life inside something cold and metal.

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