Ode to a Coping Saw — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

Perhaps because it is flexible & maneuverable

or because it has as many teeth as a school of piranhas

or because it relies on a pull rather than a push

or because it prefers circles to straight lines

or because it excels at impromptu reconstitution

or because it encompasses so much empty space

somehow it copes.

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A coping saw is a thin blade held taut in a springy, U-shaped frame, the sort of tool you might find in a school workshop. Dave Bonta makes it the hero of an ode. The joke sits in the name, which nearly announces its own moral, because the poem's last words are "it copes." What starts as a playful list of features turns into a quiet portrait of resilience. The central idea is that coping depends less on strength than on temperament: being bendy, light, a little unruly, and comfortable with gaps.

The poem is built as one sentence that refuses to finish. It opens with "Perhaps because" and then adds five more "or because" clauses, each sitting in its own couplet like a tool laid out on a bench. We wait through six reasons for the main verb, which arrives only in the final two lines. That delay drives the poem. The grammar tries one theory after another, and the speaker never claims to have the right one. "Perhaps" at the start and "somehow" near the end bracket everything in uncertainty. The reasons are real, but "somehow" admits they don't fully explain the saw's success. Coping stays slightly mysterious.

There is no rhyme and no regular beat. The lines are short, with only a couple of stresses each, so the poem moves in quick little strokes, much like the sawing it describes. The nearest thing to a chime comes at the start, where "flexible" and "maneuverable" share an ending. Both are long, bending words, and they describe the very quality the poem admires. The ampersand in place of "and" keeps things casual and compact, a small scrappy mark that suits a modest tool.

The boldest image is the simile of "a school of piranhas." A saw blade is mostly teeth, and the comparison gives a gentle workshop object a comic ferocity. It also says something about method. Piranhas don't take one huge bite. They take many small ones, and the saw gets through its material the same way, by patient, repeated nibbling. The next reason continues the thought. The saw "relies on a pull / rather than a push," and it is easy to hear a bit of advice in that, since drawing something toward you is different from shoving at it. Then comes the saw's preference for "circles / to straight lines." Wood is cut along curves and detours, and so, the poem hints, are most lives.

The two final reasons are the most interesting. "Impromptu reconstitution" is the stiffest, most Latinate phrase in the poem, and it lands among plain words like a bit of mock-grandeur. It fits the saw's habit of coming apart and going back together: the blade can be unclipped, threaded through a hole, and reattached to work from inside a shape. The phrase also describes how a person might put themselves back together on the spot, without a plan. Then the list ends on "so much empty space." The frame of a coping saw is mostly air, with a thin blade stretched across the gap. The line turns emptiness into an asset. A reader might hear loss in it, or openness, or room to move, and the poem doesn't choose. Either way, what the saw has most of is what it leaves open.

The poem matters because it takes the ode, a form traditionally given to praise, and aims it at an ordinary tool. It also gives life advice without ever telling anyone what to do. Be flexible, pull rather than push, take small bites, rebuild as you go, and make room for emptiness. All of that arrives through description, wrapped in humor, so it doesn't feel like a lecture. The poem is only a few lines long, and its closing pun makes the last line feel light and earned.

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