Ode to a Hive Tool — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

You need a key for entering where there is no door. You are much too full of your mammal self to fit through the always-open entryway & in any case would have no idea how to execute a waggle dance, which looks like sun-drugged madness to you, looming over the brood box with your angry halo.

You need the hive tool — a burglar’s jimmy — to prize the honey-heavy frames from the super, where they hang for all the world like file folders, an archive of everything that blooms.

You bring your smoker, of course, stuffed with straw you pilfered from some poor scarecrow. With tear gas & face shield you come, gloved & booted, walking gingerly as a boy with his first erection, praying for the insurgency to die down.

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Dave Bonta's poem watches a beekeeper at work and gently mocks him. The hive has no door, only an entrance that is always open, and the human is too big and too "mammal" to fit through it. He can't even read the bees' language: the waggle dance looks to him like sun-drugged madness. So he needs a tool, which the speaker compares to a burglar's jimmy, to pry the hive open.

The tone shifts from admiring to comic. The frames of honey become file folders, "an archive of everything that blooms," which makes the hive feel precious and orderly. Then the beekeeper arrives in full gear, with smoker, face shield, gloves and boots, and looks absurdly over-prepared. The comparison to a boy with his first erection adds awkward, nervous humor. The final image treats the bees as an "insurgency," and the man simply hopes they will calm down.

The mood is playful and a little uneasy. The poem suggests that the beekeeper is an intruder, clumsy and anxious, entering a world that was never built for him.

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