Lines for a wet summer — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

A wet summer. At the entrance to the hollow, twin peaks of gravel.

Storm-carved ruts on the gravel driveway fill up with hailstones.

Blue damselflies patrol the slow-moving waters of the blueberry bog.

Done berry picking, I wash the bog mud off my legs with brown bog water.

Morning thunder, then rain. “It’s just getting it out of its system, right?”

An indoor picnic. The child climbs the steep stairs to the green room.

In lieu of a curtain, a checkered shirt catches the evening sun.

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Rain hangs over every scene in this series of short, quiet snapshots, yet the speaker never complains about it. Instead, they simply notice what the weather has done: ruts in the driveway filling with hailstones, damselflies skimming over the bog, mud washed off with water that is itself brown. The wetness becomes part of the landscape, and the speaker seems at home in it.

The mood is calm and gently humorous. The remark about the morning thunder, "It's just getting it out of its system, right?", sounds like something said to comfort a child, or maybe oneself, and it treats the storm like a grumpy person letting off steam. The indoor picnic and the child climbing the stairs suggest a family making the best of a rained-out day. The last image, a checkered shirt standing in for a curtain and catching the evening sun, feels like a small reward: ordinary, improvised, and warm after all that gray.

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