Walking stick — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The walking stick picks its way upside down along the underside of the meadow’s flowering surface — goldenrod, asters, snakeroot — a stem among stems, stalking just the right leaf. When it reaches a gap in the canopy, it stops to sway — a rhythmic rocking. Then one spined twig reaches for the nearest likely toehold & the rest of it follows, stretched like the shadow of a tree in winter across the glaring moment of the sky.

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Dave Bonta watches a walking stick, the insect that looks like a twig, as it moves slowly through a meadow. Seen from below, the flowers become a kind of ceiling, and the insect hangs upside down beneath goldenrod, asters and snakeroot, passing itself off as just another stem. The short lines mimic its movement: they step, pause and step again. When the insect reaches a gap, it stops and sways, then reaches out one spiny limb and drags the rest of its body after it.

The speaker doesn't announce a feeling. The mood comes through close, patient attention, and a quiet sense of wonder. The ending is the high point. The stretched-out insect is compared to a tree's shadow in winter laid across a bright sky. That image turns something tiny into something wide and delicate, and it suggests that careful looking can make a small moment feel large.

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