Like a Snow Flea — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

Like a snow flea, wingless but spring-loaded, its only defense being to launch itself in a random direction, but which sometimes ends up right back in the same spot.

Which absorbs moisture through a life-long feeding tube in its abdomen & breathes directly through its thick skin.

Whose blood contains an antifreeze-like protein that may turn out to have commercial applications in ice cream & the storage of organs for transplant.

Which joins a million others of its kind in late winter — cabin-fever time — for mass migrations across the frozen Serengeti of the woodlot, where they are often mistaken for ashes, black pepper, or some other dark seasoning.

Which continues to molt even after reaching maturity & alternates between stages when it can have sex & stages when it can eat, shedding its skin after each.

Which reproduces without physical contact: the male deposits a spermatophore, the female stops by later & picks it up.

Which can walk on water.

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The poem is a list of odd facts about the snow flea, stacked one after another in a single long sentence that never quite finishes. Each stanza begins with "Which" or "Whose," so the tiny creature keeps being described but never actually arrives at a main verb. The title's "Like" hints that the snow flea is a comparison for something else, though the poem never says what. We are left to wonder whether the speaker means himself, or people in general.

The tone is deadpan and curious, with quiet jokes tucked in: the "frozen Serengeti of the woodlot," the fleas mistaken for "some other dark seasoning," the mating method that needs no contact. The speaker seems fond of this scrappy survivor, which jumps at random, sometimes lands where it began, and still carries on. The final line, "Which can walk on water," lands almost like a miracle, giving a humble speck a surprising dignity. The mood is wry, observant, and gently wondering.

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