Tree-sitter — Summary

It sat down in my pool. Swayed like a sapling. Spoke to me in its dreams, which were as plush as truffles fruiting in the dark. Luna, it said, Luna— as if I were its pale progenitor.

Others of its kind boiled in & out like tiny, earth-bound storms, chewing with a fury, & my cousins shook the mountain when they came down. My strange familiar clung to me with its naked forelimbs & howled.

It had one short root with which it communicated to others of its kind, reaching through the air somehow. Where did it go, that larva? Did it ever manage to spin a real cocoon?

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The poem is built around a puzzle: what exactly is the "it" that sits down in the speaker's pool? Clues like "larva," "cocoon," "naked forelimbs," and "one short root" suggest a small insect-like creature, though the speaker also treats it almost like a child or a spirit. It sways, dreams, and calls out "Luna," as if mistaking the speaker for a pale, moon-like parent.

The speaker seems to be both the creature's mother figure and something much larger. The "cousins" who shake the mountain suggest a world of giants, while the creature's own kind are "tiny, earth-bound storms." That shift in scale makes the scene feel dreamlike, tender and a little eerie.

The mood moves from wonder to wistfulness. The closing questions, "Where did it go, that larva? / Did it ever manage to spin / a real cocoon?", sound like someone worrying about a small, vulnerable being they could not protect or follow.

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