Cwm — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

One word, it doesn’t matter which, can be the pebble that sets off an avalanche. Careful! We could be buried until spring, limbs tangled under the snowy quilt.

One syllable older than language can shock the snow awake, recollecting its true nature: to flow, to flood.

Listen: the brass bell fastened to the neck of a sheep has some other sheep’s tooth for a clapper. These noises we make for each other & through each other, mouth against throat, broadcast our position at every trembling step.

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Dave Bonta's "Cwm" begins with a warning: one word, any word, can set off an avalanche. The speaker pictures how easily speech can unsettle things, burying people "until spring" in a tangle of limbs under snow. It sounds playful, but there's real caution in the "Careful!"

Then the mood shifts. A sound "older than language" wakes the snow and reminds it of its "true nature: to flow, to flood." Here the avalanche stops seeming purely threatening. Disturbance becomes something natural, even necessary, like language itself.

The last stanza turns to a quieter image: a sheep's bell with another sheep's tooth as its clapper. Judging by this, the poem sees our voices as borrowed and shared, made "for each other & through each other." We make noise to show where we are, even though each step is shaky. The ending feels tender and a little vulnerable. Speaking is risky, but it's how we find one another.

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