SKETCH FOR A STILL LIFE WITH SAXOPHONE — Summary

Dave BontaCheerful

What a quaint notion–that life could be anything but kinetic, frenetic, in full swing! But let’s have a galvanized steel bucket of ice sent up & see what happens. Something to shine, to gleam. And a wooden bowl of felt- &-plastic fruit on a low table. And for the proper contrast, for corners appropriately dark, Japan’s the place: the traditional-style half of a hotel suite, say, in a seaside resort just beginning to fall on hard times. The once-full register showing alarming gaps, the heat turned off in the hall . . . but still not a speck of dust. Simply an air of genteel poverty essential to the timeless equipoise of things in their rightful places, from the imitation paper windows to the Zen-inspired alcove with scroll & spray of blossoms to the thrumming of some distant power source–a drone as melancholy as any chorus of autumn crickets. Let the uncorked chardonnay take what it needs of oxygen & light. Let nothing discompose this most exotic of guests: the saxophone resting in the corner like a golden carp. See how at home it looks? ready for the oddly missing shoe to begin tapping.

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The speaker plays at being a set designer, arranging a still life piece by piece. He starts by mocking the idea that life could ever be anything but busy and in full swing, then sets out to build a picture of calm anyway: a bucket of ice, a bowl of fake fruit, a hotel suite in Japan. The setting is shabby but spotless, a seaside resort slipping into hard times, with gaps in the guest register and no heat in the hall. Yet everything sits exactly where it belongs.

The mood is quiet, wistful and a little playful. The speaker seems to enjoy the "genteel poverty" of the room, and the faint hum in the background sounds as melancholy as crickets in autumn. At the centre is the saxophone, an instrument tied to movement and sound, now resting in the corner "like a golden carp." The last lines suggest that stillness isn't total: the room seems to wait for a missing shoe to start tapping.

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