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Dave BontaContemplative

I cough into the night & a deer snorts in alarm. I am hungry & dangerous; small bones & bits of muscle get stuck in my throat. My feline love of comfort may dull my instincts, but I still read fear as a form of praise. And I want to tell the deer: I am the animal who rid these hills of your original killers. Shall we resent each other’s part in the conquest? We share almost the pact between a pastoralist & his herd. The tamed woods are as easy to walk through as a pasture now; few thickets remain where a big cat could lie in ambush. But a summer night still teems with things that rasp & tick, other things that flash at eye-level & in between, the dark milk of stars.

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The speaker is a human being standing outside at night, and a cough is enough to make a deer snort in alarm. That small moment sets off a strange act of self-recognition. The speaker imagines being seen as a predator: "hungry & dangerous," with bones stuck in the throat. Yet there's also a softer, "feline" side, fond of comfort, which has dulled the old instincts.

The speaker wants to speak to the deer and point out an odd fact: humans got rid of the big predators that once hunted it. That makes people both enemy and protector, a bit like a herder with his animals. The tone is wry and thoughtful rather than boastful, as the speaker wonders whether either side should resent the other.

The ending shifts the mood. The woods are tamed, but the night still hums with rasping, ticking, flashing creatures, and the "dark milk of stars" above. The poem closes in quiet wonder, with a sense that wildness hasn't completely gone.

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