Lepidoptera: haiku — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The butterfly weed’s deep orange— a monarch stops to fill up

Halogen flashlight: he picks out the luna moth from 100 yards

The stripped catalpa still quivers in the breeze: starving caterpillars

Candlelight vigil outside the state prison— the smell of burning moths

Hummingbird battle: only the hummingbird moth remains on the flowers

Red-spotted purples mating in mid-air— her wings stop moving

Bright yellow goldfinch— the tattered tiger swallowtail surrenders the thistles

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Seven short haiku watch moths and butterflies, and the moments are quietly competitive or fragile. A monarch "fills up" on bright orange milkweed as if stopping at a gas station. Someone with a flashlight spots a luna moth from impossibly far away. A bare catalpa tree trembles because hungry caterpillars have eaten its leaves. Hummingbirds fight over flowers, and the one that is left is a hummingbird moth, which looks like a hummingbird but isn't. A goldfinch pushes a worn-out swallowtail off the thistles.

Two poems turn darker. At a candlelight vigil outside a state prison, moths burn in the flames, and the human ritual carries an unintended cost. Meanwhile mating red-spotted purples drift in mid-air, and the line "her wings stop moving" is hard to read: it could be stillness in the act, or something more final.

The speaker mostly observes rather than comments. The mood is curious and affectionate, but it keeps noticing hunger, exhaustion, and death at the edges of beauty.

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