F-stop — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

Splendour of snow blown sideways through the penitentiary yard, plastering the brown scissor-blade legs of cattails in the ditch, filling keyholes & every available crack, razor-wire softening into white ropes

when the bang of an unfastened corncrib door brings everyone — the guards & the guarded — to a full stop. This was once an ordinary farm with ordinary livestock. Ghostly pigeons arrive from a blurred-out depth of field.

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A snowstorm sweeps across a prison yard, and the speaker watches it with something close to awe. The snow coats cattail stalks, packs into keyholes and cracks, and even turns the razor wire into soft white rope. For a moment, the harsh machinery of confinement looks gentle, almost beautiful.

Then a loose corncrib door bangs, and everyone stops: guards and prisoners alike. That shared pause is the heart of the poem. For a second, the line between the watchers and the watched disappears. The speaker also reminds us the place "was once an ordinary farm," so the prison sits on top of an older, quieter life. The ghostly pigeons that appear at the end feel like echoes of that past, drifting in from a blurry background.

The mood is hushed and strange, a mix of wonder and unease. The title, "F-stop," fits: the poem works like a photograph, with the snow softening the focus and the world held still.

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